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A simple prayer..

Far above the land I know
Heard a voice of glory
In search of it
I started this beautiful journey

Was it a dream? Or in real
I don't know
Wish I could join in Harmony
Soul and heart never apart


Darkness fills the space
Pain felt , sorrows burried
Deep within. I want to be there
With you..


Can I ?
Response is what I cry for
In return you sing these tunes
Nostalgia hits and I am unaware


You care, Dont you
But why is that I feel alone
Simple and beaten
Can you lend a hand please, I plead

A soft gentle touch
I know forever you are there
Besides me, holding me
Showering the love I need.
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Misterio Vida said…
a simple prayer indeed...liked it... thanks for sharing :)
September 23, 2011 at 5:38 PM
Irfanuddin said…
simple, yet impressive....:)
September 23, 2011 at 6:25 PM
Amrit said…
Nice. Why H is capital in "Harmony"?
September 23, 2011 at 6:49 PM
Bikram said…
I hope and wish the little prayer gets listened to and gets fulfilled

Bikram's
September 23, 2011 at 7:27 PM
Insignia said…
Intense yet simple :) Liked it.
September 24, 2011 at 1:00 PM
Chandana said…
Lovely! Very touching :)
September 24, 2011 at 1:48 PM
Kavita Saharia said…
May your prayer be answered :)
September 24, 2011 at 7:37 PM
KP said…
Lovely words.. nice poem..
September 25, 2011 at 8:09 PM
Anonymous said…
Ashwini Here friends, I am having a hard time posting comments using my account. Anybody facing similar issues:(:(

@Muhammad Israr @Sum @Irfan @ Girish : Thank you!

@A: It did not happen with intention , but when you pointed it out I felt it was better this way.

@Bikram @Kavita: Thanks for the wishes..

@Insignia @Sujatha: Thank you ladies.

@TheGirlatfirstavenue @KP: Thank you for liking it.
September 26, 2011 at 9:03 AM
Rachna Parmar said…
Nice prayer, girl. Wish you the best/
September 26, 2011 at 3:38 PM
SATYA LAKSHMI said…
You deserve, you will get it
September 30, 2011 at 10:15 PM
ಅಶ್ವಿನಿ/Ashwini said…
@Latha Vijayakumar: Thanks for the wishes. Welcome to my space - Unveil the other side.
October 3, 2011 at 4:46 PM
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