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Wait!

Twisiting the gold chain
I lay, waiting for you
Tuning my tiny brain -
to a glimpse of grey and blue

Are your feelings same as mine?
Neither able to wine nor dine
Do you ponder over - what to do ?
If "yes", Drop a simple clue.

Amidst the striking light, high up there
Smiling face is what you wear
Slowly bringing up signs of roars
Promising your way - down here, for sure

Was it the sight of a Withering flower
That spelled you into a beautiful shower?
Indeed I accept, you do hear
Our deep prayers forever and ever

May you come a zillion times
Each visit, remain fresh as lime
Soothing calmness - divine crime
Clings on for a lasting lifetime.
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Sahana Rao said…
Aha! That is a beautiful poem.
Who is the lucky person? ;)
July 13, 2011 at 10:29 AM
Irfanuddin said…
beautifully penned thoughts.....wish the person at the other end also has the same feeling.....

irfan
July 13, 2011 at 4:13 PM
Sum said…
Beautiful poem.... Nice rhyming words.... If i'm not wrong, isn't it about the rains you've written??
July 13, 2011 at 5:47 PM
R. Ramesh said…
u r very encouraging..thanks a tonne buddy:)
July 13, 2011 at 10:22 PM
ಅಶ್ವಿನಿ/ Ashwini said…
@Spicy Sweet: Thank you! Lucky me it is:)

@Irfan : Thanks for the encouraging words.

@Sum: Googly! you've caught it right.. Rains indeed the lucky person. :)

@Ramesh : Thank you so much!
July 14, 2011 at 9:20 AM
Rachna said…
Wow, how warm and lovely :).
July 14, 2011 at 10:11 AM
ಅಶ್ವಿನಿ/ Ashwini said…
@ Rachana and Mishi: Thank you!
July 15, 2011 at 8:59 AM
chitra said…
this is such a lovely poem.
September 5, 2011 at 4:31 PM
ಅಶ್ವಿನಿ/ Ashwini said…
@Chitra: & @sunbyanyname: Thank you so much!
September 6, 2011 at 8:47 AM
anatreek said…
Its raining outside..I guess it heard ur poem :)
September 6, 2011 at 6:03 PM
Hemant said…
Awesomely written
Beautifully crafted
Each line can be visualized....
A gr88 piece of art
September 6, 2011 at 7:00 PM
Anonymous said…
drop a simple clue! how we wish this when in love.....that anxiety 24x7! :) very well penned ashwini :)

~Chintan
September 6, 2011 at 8:51 PM
Hariharan Valady said…
Beautiful. Very well written
September 6, 2011 at 10:56 PM
Anonymous said…
Very nice poetry....keep on writing.
September 6, 2011 at 11:43 PM
Priyanka said…
Lime isn't fresh and juicy all the time..so beware!

:)

Nice post!
:)

Do have a look at my blog too..I write poetry too..!
cheers
www.priyankazneverland.blogspot.com
September 7, 2011 at 12:38 AM
ಅಶ್ವಿನಿ/ Ashwini said…
@Ana_treek: Wow! magical... Thanks!

@Hemant: Welcome to my space and thank you so much for taking your time and reading..

@Chintan: Wish!;) Thanks!

@Ashwini & @Tusker @Merrymusing @Priyanka @Sawan: Welcome to Unveil the other side. You guys have a lovely blogs too.. Will visit more and drop comments on the stuff I'd read. It might take a while though. Thanks for stopping by and am glad you guys like these lines.
September 8, 2011 at 9:02 AM
ಅಶ್ವಿನಿ/ Ashwini said…
@Rajendra Raikwar: Thank you very much for liking it.
November 24, 2011 at 3:01 PM
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