Twisiting the gold chain
I lay, waiting for you
Tuning my tiny brain -
to a glimpse of grey and blue

Are your feelings same as mine?
Neither able to wine nor dine
Do you ponder over - what to do ?
If "yes", Drop a simple clue.

Amidst the striking light, high up there
Smiling face is what you wear
Slowly bringing up signs of roars
Promising your way - down here, for sure

Was it the sight of a Withering flower
That spelled you into a beautiful shower?
Indeed I accept, you do hear
Our deep prayers forever and ever

May you come a zillion times
Each visit, remain fresh as lime
Soothing calmness - divine crime
Clings on for a lasting lifetime.


Spicy Sweet said...

Aha! That is a beautiful poem.
Who is the lucky person? ;)


beautifully penned thoughts.....wish the person at the other end also has the same feeling.....


Sum said...

Beautiful poem.... Nice rhyming words.... If i'm not wrong, isn't it about the rains you've written??

R. Ramesh said...

u r very encouraging..thanks a tonne buddy:)

ಅಶ್ವಿನಿ/ Ashwini said...

@Spicy Sweet: Thank you! Lucky me it is:)

@Irfan : Thanks for the encouraging words.

@Sum: Googly! you've caught it right.. Rains indeed the lucky person. :)

@Ramesh : Thank you so much!

Rachna said...

Wow, how warm and lovely :).

Mishi said...

beautiful !!

ಅಶ್ವಿನಿ/ Ashwini said...

@ Rachana and Mishi: Thank you!

chitra said...

this is such a lovely poem.

sunbyanyname said...


ಅಶ್ವಿನಿ/ Ashwini said...

@Chitra: & @sunbyanyname: Thank you so much!

Ana_treek said...

Its raining outside..I guess it heard ur poem :)

Hemant said...

Awesomely written
Beautifully crafted
Each line can be visualized....
A gr88 piece of art

Chintan said...

drop a simple clue! how we wish this when in love.....that anxiety 24x7! :) very well penned ashwini :)


Ashwini said...

Hi Ashwini
Ashwini Here :)
Beautiful lines .

TuSKeR said...

simply awesome

Hariharan Valady said...

Beautiful. Very well written

Anonymous said...

Very nice poetry....keep on writing.

Priyanka said...

Lime isn't fresh and juicy all the time..so beware!


Nice post!

Do have a look at my blog too..I write poetry too..!

sawan said...

good indeed!

ಅಶ್ವಿನಿ/ Ashwini said...

@Ana_treek: Wow! magical... Thanks!

@Hemant: Welcome to my space and thank you so much for taking your time and reading..

@Chintan: Wish!;) Thanks!

@Ashwini & @Tusker @Merrymusing @Priyanka @Sawan: Welcome to Unveil the other side. You guys have a lovely blogs too.. Will visit more and drop comments on the stuff I'd read. It might take a while though. Thanks for stopping by and am glad you guys like these lines.

Rajendra Raikwar said...


ಅಶ್ವಿನಿ/ Ashwini said...

@Rajendra Raikwar: Thank you very much for liking it.



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