Wait!
Twisiting the gold chain
I lay, waiting for you
Tuning my tiny brain -
to a glimpse of grey and blue
Are your feelings same as mine?
Neither able to wine nor dine
Do you ponder over - what to do ?
If "yes", Drop a simple clue.
Amidst the striking light, high up there
Smiling face is what you wear
Slowly bringing up signs of roars
Promising your way - down here, for sure
Was it the sight of a Withering flower
That spelled you into a beautiful shower?
Indeed I accept, you do hear
Our deep prayers forever and ever
May you come a zillion times
Each visit, remain fresh as lime
Soothing calmness - divine crime
Clings on for a lasting lifetime.
I lay, waiting for you
Tuning my tiny brain -
to a glimpse of grey and blue
Are your feelings same as mine?
Neither able to wine nor dine
Do you ponder over - what to do ?
If "yes", Drop a simple clue.
Amidst the striking light, high up there
Smiling face is what you wear
Slowly bringing up signs of roars
Promising your way - down here, for sure
Was it the sight of a Withering flower
That spelled you into a beautiful shower?
Indeed I accept, you do hear
Our deep prayers forever and ever
May you come a zillion times
Each visit, remain fresh as lime
Soothing calmness - divine crime
Clings on for a lasting lifetime.
Comments
Who is the lucky person? ;)
irfan
@Irfan : Thanks for the encouraging words.
@Sum: Googly! you've caught it right.. Rains indeed the lucky person. :)
@Ramesh : Thank you so much!
Beautifully crafted
Each line can be visualized....
A gr88 piece of art
~Chintan
:)
Nice post!
:)
Do have a look at my blog too..I write poetry too..!
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www.priyankazneverland.blogspot.com
@Hemant: Welcome to my space and thank you so much for taking your time and reading..
@Chintan: Wish!;) Thanks!
@Ashwini & @Tusker @Merrymusing @Priyanka @Sawan: Welcome to Unveil the other side. You guys have a lovely blogs too.. Will visit more and drop comments on the stuff I'd read. It might take a while though. Thanks for stopping by and am glad you guys like these lines.