tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7536128088184635468.post7015479906072264486..comments2023-11-10T06:57:03.949+05:30Comments on Unveil the Other Side: Him and Her ~ Fictionಅಶ್ವಿನಿ/ Ashwinihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01429274307224478792noreply@blogger.comBlogger12125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7536128088184635468.post-11830176513176370112023-10-26T10:19:49.606+05:302023-10-26T10:19:49.606+05:30I read your fiction featuring Bhoomika, Angad, and...I read your fiction featuring Bhoomika, Angad, and Bragalina. The conclusion was impressive, especially the connection to similar quotes. I was particularly fond of Bhoomika's character. The quote about anger and forgiveness resonated deeply: "Anger makes you smaller, while forgiveness forces you to grow beyond what you were." I believe you have great potential as a writer, Ashwini. Consider spending dedicated time alone, contemplating writing as a full-time profession. I genuinely see talent in you. Trust me, you will excel as a writer. And so is your you tube channel too.GSnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7536128088184635468.post-22517201298813792092011-09-26T10:04:09.783+05:302011-09-26T10:04:09.783+05:30Hi Ashvini, I was able to read this story only tod...Hi Ashvini, I was able to read this story only today... Nice read.. IMO, it was because of what Angad was for all those years, Bhoomi was able to forgive...<br />And loved the lines at the end... Wonderful quotes... I too am oscillating between forgive-or-not-to-forgive, though in a completely different context with completely different set of people....Sumhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11516678367083112428noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7536128088184635468.post-31419182408438218062011-09-21T11:22:21.916+05:302011-09-21T11:22:21.916+05:30@Sahana: I was actually looking for those lines - ...@Sahana: I was actually looking for those lines - "No one is can go out of this world flawless. We do have our own flaws. <br />When life is bigger than the flaws, one can forgive." But I am kind of oscillating between both the views - forgive or not to forgive. Maybe it depends on the context and the situation.<br /><br />@Bikram: Bikram you aren't weird, you are absolutely doing fine. I'd love to see all think the way you do. As I said in one of my previous comments I was kind of climaxing the story with the thoughts you have shared. But then somewhere I felt this way it sounded better and yeah I appreciate your thoughts. <br /><br />It is not easy to forgive so easily. Agreed!!<br /><br />@ Rachna: Hmmm Thanks for stepping in and bringing that line - "I know for a fact that no amount of temptation can make me forget that I have a loving husband and family at home. I just don't buy the " I got carried away" line, because I apply to same morality to my own conduct." I know this is what each one should remember whatever hits them whereever they are. Very well said. Thanks.ಅಶ್ವಿನಿ/ Ashwinihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01429274307224478792noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7536128088184635468.post-3064488632923264982011-09-21T10:09:22.834+05:302011-09-21T10:09:22.834+05:30No you are not weird Bikram. If more people were l...No you are not weird Bikram. If more people were like you, there will be less problems around the world :). I know for a fact that no amount of temptation can make me forget that I have a loving husband and family at home. I just don't buy the " I got carried away" line, because I apply to same morality to my own conduct.Rachnahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02275266551382931603noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7536128088184635468.post-79011087820161067452011-09-20T20:37:00.618+05:302011-09-20T20:37:00.618+05:30Well bad thing to do .. But it seems angad had som...Well bad thing to do .. But it seems angad had some moral values he felt bad and told his wife straigh away , so thats good.. BUt i doubt if things will be forgiven os easily it will take time .. maybe some time of living away from each other .. and a lot of repenting by angad for sure .. <br /><br />how can a man jsut go to bed with a woman without a thought is what i ma thinking or maybe i am weird man ... dont know <br /><br /><a href="http://mannbikram.wordpress.com" rel="nofollow">Bikram's</a>Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7536128088184635468.post-35761799264848073572011-09-20T13:09:08.791+05:302011-09-20T13:09:08.791+05:30Good story line.
No one is can go out of this wor...Good story line. <br />No one is can go out of this world flawless. We do have our own flaws. <br />When life is bigger than the flaws, one can forgive. Attitude is what that matters. Loved the quotes in the end.Sahana Raohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06313761460595189822noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7536128088184635468.post-35488021667844660802011-09-20T12:21:12.874+05:302011-09-20T12:21:12.874+05:30@Sujatha: That's absolutely said right. Fictio...@Sujatha: That's absolutely said right. Fiction I thought needs a hapy ending, however in reality I would think a lot over this subject of betrayal. Its hard and definitely not an act that can be forgiven easily. <br /><br />And regarding the length yes I prefer to keep them crisp and clear, cos I myself leave a lot of stories half read just for the fact that they too long.<br /><br />Ha ha ha:D I have the comment moderation activated for posts older than 3 days..<br /><br />@Sarah: Appreciate your viewpoint. Reality is definitely a contrast to the storyline.<br /><br />@KP: Thanks for reading.<br /><br />@Rachna: Hmmm while I was penning the end of this story I had actually written it to end the hard way. But I tried this ending and I liked to end it in a happy mode. Yeah reality is harsh and punishable I know but... How I wish this forgiving and forgetting is as easy as a wink.ಅಶ್ವಿನಿ/ Ashwinihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01429274307224478792noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7536128088184635468.post-83165198254418451552011-09-20T11:30:15.601+05:302011-09-20T11:30:15.601+05:30You tried to give it a good ending. As Sujatha say...You tried to give it a good ending. As Sujatha says, it is easier done in fiction. I would say, forgiveness, if it comes will come later and not so easy. Life is not easy and betrayal especially between a husband and wife is very painful. Too simplistic! Though, I completely believe in the power of forgiveness.Rachnahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02275266551382931603noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7536128088184635468.post-61450467004768468392011-09-20T11:29:04.526+05:302011-09-20T11:29:04.526+05:30Ur style of narration is very captivating and the ...Ur style of narration is very captivating and the plot is nice and contemporary..!KPhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12952400437889908620noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7536128088184635468.post-66112652314632708592011-09-19T22:35:43.196+05:302011-09-19T22:35:43.196+05:30well..the ending was perfect on account of giving ...well..the ending was perfect on account of giving a good lesson but reality is somehow different though..Betrayal cant neither be forgotten nor forgiven so easily :)<br /><br /><br />sarahSarah malikhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15900352659438484102noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7536128088184635468.post-81754512276974259502011-09-19T18:28:42.914+05:302011-09-19T18:28:42.914+05:30oh wow, i was so happy to see the line "your ...oh wow, i was so happy to see the line "your comment was published" :)))Sujatha Sathyahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00448034391267400236noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7536128088184635468.post-17474282089828507102011-09-19T18:27:44.230+05:302011-09-19T18:27:44.230+05:30reminds me of another one: all's well that end...reminds me of another one: all's well that ends well :)<br /><br />betrayal is a very dicey subject. i remember writing about it last year on my blog<br />http://sujathasathya.blogspot.com/2010/10/betrayal.html<br /><br />so i know the ending here looks picture perfect. it may be because it is fiction & also because all your fictional accounts you have tried (is it conscious?) to keep it a certain length unlike some i read that goes on & on & on. thank you for that Ashwini.i know its not easy to build a story & take it to its logical climax with a tight hold on its length & esp when the issue involves an emotion as confounding as this one. i must say - well done thereSujatha Sathyahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00448034391267400236noreply@blogger.com